Film Pitch Feedback

*Test audio.


*Good locations.


*Will they bump into each other too much before meeting ?

No they will only actually bump into each other at the end of the sequence, instead they will be just missing each other.


*Will they let you film in the Shard ?

We have contacted the main desk at the Shard, and they gave us permission.


*For the sunset times, make sure you look up the times correctly because now it is winter it gets dark very quickly.


*Shots are very hard so make sure the cameraman knows what he is doing.

We have planned the shots we need, in enough detail.


*Good strong character ideas.


*Good development in the story line.


*Are you going to have credits ?

Throughout the establishing shots, at the start.


*Romance is an original idea.


*Detailed ideas regarding location.


*Complex shot types.


*Contrasting characters-ideas that 'opposites attract'.


*Would be a good idea to go out and practice complex shots.

We have created a preliminary filming sequence, where we tested using a split screen, which was something we thought would be complex.


*Well structured.


*Who will be playing the main characters ?

We are using actors within our group, with Josh and Sara as the two protagonists.


*Like the idea of a split screen completing different activities and then joining shots when they meet.


*Like the idea of the meeting at Hyde park, very romantic/typical.


*Will you have dialogue as cafes are quite noisy.

The cafe will have one dialogue line, this may be an issue so we may film this shot in a park instead.


*If your main cameraman is not filming, who will be confident in shooting the pull focus shot ?

We have practices this shot, and so we know what we are doing.